I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Leo Thanks for sharing so much of your learning with us, really interesting to see the different things you have been learning. Google slides are such a great way to display your work. I like your octopus advise to share the scales, but then choose your friends carefully. You have some really long sentences, maybe try a full-stop instead of 'and'. Shorter sentences are easier for other people to read and can make our writing more interesting. Keep sharing, so we can see what you are leaning
Hi Leo
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing so much of your learning with us, really interesting to see the different things you have been learning.
Google slides are such a great way to display your work. I like your octopus advise to share the scales, but then choose your friends carefully.
You have some really long sentences, maybe try a full-stop instead of 'and'. Shorter sentences are easier for other people to read and can make our writing more interesting.
Keep sharing, so we can see what you are leaning