Ciao viewers,
Today I am going to make a story, it is going to be about the treacherous caves and the land of mystery. This is day one.
Once their was a kid, a kid called Stuart. This kid was full of adventure. Once he was walking through a sandy track with a bunch of shops on the side. Their was a machine, it said, "find your future at the one..the only...FORTUNEATOOOOR". Stuart thought mmm I wonder what my future is. He had a turn and it said you go on a wild adventure of wonder and mystery. He went to another shop that sold fruit, the person at the shop said you know there's cool cave. It is said to lead to a land of mystery well thats what I have heard anyways", he asked the man what the land of mystery was? The man said. "I don't know thats all I heard". When he went to bed that night he started to think about it was it real was it made up.
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I like that your words dragged me into your story Leo.
ReplyDeleteI like that you used punctuation,but there are some other places that you could of added it.
Thanks for sharing your learning and I can't wait to read the one about Brooklyn's party :)