Monday, May 25, 2020
returning to school
Talofa lava readers, I am going to share my first draft of some writing. I have done some writing I have done writing about returning to school. our teacher gave us some instructions to write about how we were feeling about returning back to school. Could you please tell me if there is anything, I could do to improve my writing?
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Kia ora Leo I like how improved your writing and you were telling how you felt and why you felt that way. This writing reminds me of my writing that I writed. You could also go back and finish your writing because your writing ends with he had. I have a question I need to ask you how did you feel walking throw the gate on Monday.?
ReplyDeletethank you Marleigh for the advice. A bit nervous
DeleteHello Leo.
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed catching up with you and seeing how you are.I was a bit nervous about coming back to school.I think it was because I had been away for so long and I hadn't talked to any of the other staff members over the lock down holidays.
Hello Leo.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.