I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 13, 2020
The present writing.
Bang boom pew pew bam rattata there were flashing lights. There was a rosy red cheeked boy. He was playing video games in a dark gloomy room in the lounge.The boy was so engrossed in the game.His Mum came home and gave him a big light brown box. He opened the box and got really excited. Because it was a puppy he was holding up and he looked at the puppy from another perspective , but then he realized it was missing a paw and wasn’t happy and threw the puppy away. He started playing his game again. The puppy found a red round ball and brought the ball to the boy. The boy kicked the ball and it landed in the box. The little puppy went into the box and the box fell on top of the puppy and the puppy got out of the box but the puppy kept falling over and brought the ball to the boy. He smiled and grabbed his stilts and walked out. He was missing a leg dun dun. They played outside.
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