I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
The SPCA does an amazing job, don't they? I didn't realise just how many animals they helped each year - that's incredible! I have noticed though, that you've copied this bit of information from the SPCA website. We can't award points for activities that haven't been completed by you. It's absolutely fine to use websites to help you with the tasks but you need to put things into your own words. If you give this activity another go, and put the information about the SPCA in your own words, I'll be able to give you the full number of points.
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The SPCA does an amazing job, don't they? I didn't realise just how many animals they helped each year - that's incredible! I have noticed though, that you've copied this bit of information from the SPCA website. We can't award points for activities that haven't been completed by you. It's absolutely fine to use websites to help you with the tasks but you need to put things into your own words. If you give this activity another go, and put the information about the SPCA in your own words, I'll be able to give you the full number of points.
Thanks Leo. :)
Bye for now,
Mikey
Hi Mikey it's Leo. thanks for letting me know. they do help a lot.
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