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Friday, March 22, 2019

My Description about a shark

Walt: Write Descriptions

I have written a description about a great white shark. I have put my personal best in my description. I hope you like it.

 Always welcome to send a feedback



8 comments:

  1. Hello Leo.What a great idea to add a photo of the animal you are describing.I like how you told us that it's a 'large' predator.I'd be in the rock pools otherwise, looking for a little fish about the size of a whitebait:)Do you know if the shark has any predators?I look forward to hearing from you.

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  2. some of a sharks predator is a seal and a sea lion.
    your amazing.

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    1. Good morning Leo.It might pay if you check what a predator does.You have written that a sharks predator is a seal or sea lion.Wouldn't a shark eat a seal? I don't think a seal would chase a large shark and try to eat it.

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  3. Hello Leo.Good on you for checking out Google.It's a great tool to help us get information.

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  4. wow leo that looks like you had fun

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