I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Leo! It's me Krystallynna from your class room 9. WHat a amazing story you have done!!! I love the picture of the girl running. And what I also love about your work is your describing words! Well done keep up the work!
Hello Leo! It's me Krystallynna from your class room 9. WHat a amazing story you have done!!! I love the picture of the girl running. And what I also love about your work is your describing words! Well done keep up the work!
ReplyDeletehi. thanks
DeleteHi Leo you have some good ideas in your story. I like that it had a happy ending. maybe next time you could add more details.
ReplyDeletehi thank for the tip and all
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